Hi everyone, I wrote a summary response and I received feedback. Now I am making corrections, but i couldn't correct that one, My sentence, As a result, Friedman (2011) reveals important facts about world’s present situation, over using resources, permanent damages earth had taken. Nevertheless, the solution he offers seems not clear and not comprehensive. My teacher labeled it as "Awkward- This expression or construction is cumbersome or difficult to read. Consider rewrite it". Can you help me with this?
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