What would you change in this report in terms of grammar and punctuation? I think it appears to be pretty solid. On Tuesday, 4 June 1999 at 6:50 pm, Mary Smith (Customer Service Manager, Thrifty Stores Inc) sent me an email that stated the following: ...................... . On Wednesday, 5 June 1999 at about 4:12 pm, I interviewed and obtained a written and an oral confession from Larry Greman (Marketing Director, Thrifty Stores Inc) in which he admitted to stealing $4,000 from the cash office safe on Monday, 8 May 1999 at about 5:03 pm at the Thrifty Store on 5 Burlington Ave in Yonkers, NY. Present as an interview witness was Bonnie Schaffer (Accounting Clerk, Thrifty Stores Inc). On Friday, 7 June 1999 [ comma after '1999' ? ]...
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