Please look at this sentence. "Although the eighth-grader was eventually allowed to go to class again thanks to the intervention of local media and youth union, the incident serves as a warning for young "keyboard heroes" who say on the computer screen what they know they would be punished for their words in real life ." This sentence looks a little odd to me. I think there is a missing word between "what they know" and "they would be" . Is the sentence correct? I mean, he has to write like this. If young "keyboard heroes" say on the computer screen what they know, they would be punished for their words in real life. Looks a missing word is "," or "as". Am I wrong? Or because the clause that "they would be" is connected to...
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